BENDER, Persephone

[persephone]

PERSEPHONE----BENDER



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-- FULL NAME; Persephone Bender
-- NICKNAMES; Perce, Percy
-- AGE; 17 years old
-- BIRTHDAY; May 26, 1994
-- HOMETOWN; Seattle, Washington
-- NATIONALITY; Canadian and American
-- SEXUALITY; Straight
-- MEMBER GROUP; Celebrity. Her current occupation is an amazing, paid singers.
-- PLAYBY; Ariana Grande

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T H E M A G I C B R I N G
~ O N A L L T H E P R E T E N D E R S O N E D A Y
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-- LIKES; Singing, reading, writing (mostly songs), using the computer, watching T.V., playing the piano, texting her friends and her BF <3
-- DISLIKES; Bitches, jerks, tomatoes, annoying people, getting ditched (although it almost never happens)
-- SECRETS; She almost had sex with her boyfriend once, she's cheated on a previous boyfriend.
-- FEARS; Spiders, snakes, the unknown
-- HABITS; Bites her nails, cracks her knuckles, chews her hair (sometimes)
-- GOALS; Percy's sole goal in life is to help others in need. She wants to make sure that every other person in the world is as lucky as she is.

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-- FATHER; Matthew Bender, 39, works as a home estate realtor
-- MOTHER; Shannon, 36, artist
-- SIBLINGS; Brendt-Alex, brother
-- OTHER FAMILY; N/A
-- PETS; Cookie, 1 human year old, mix of shit-zu and bischon frise
-- HISTORY; Percy's history isn't very detailed. She grew up in Seattle when her brother was killed. She was immediately placed into an expensive preschool for her to 'grow up and learn in'. Her first brother, Jake, was murdered which left Percy in heartbreak and constant tears. As she grew older, though, she learned to break free of the loss and was able to move on to better schools and a better life. She was always very good in school and made everyone around her love being around her. Percy was living the perfect life and everyone envied her.
At the age of 15, Percy was discovered by a talent agent for having a beautiful, captivating voice at a 3rd grade play. She then moved on to become a great singer and performed at several gigs in different places. She continued to go to school throughout everything. And, well, the rest you can figure out -- Percy continues to live the best life ever. She met a guy named Brett in 8th grade, and they've been together ever since.

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H O W T H E C R O W D S ~
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-- NAME/ALIAS; Kyla
-- AGE; 15
-- GENDER; Female
-- ROLEPLAYING EXPERIENCE; About 7 years
-- OTHER CHARACTERS; None yet

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2.0, with some changes by RYLA of crazy dreams
come true

[RYLA]

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while i appreciate your interest in crazy dreams come true, there are a few things in the app that need to be changed. sephy is a canon character, and there is some information about her in the canon list (see here) that your app does not correspond with, such as her age, member group, and family members.

1) according to the canon list, persephone grew up in vancouver, british columbia, canada, which is where the setting of the site is, as well. she's sixteen, not seventeen, and her member group is a nobody; she's a high school student, and she has no real dreams of becoming a celebrity.

2) most of her personality seems fine; but while the secrets are pretty good as secrets go, they don't exactly go along with the persephone in the canon list. sephy's a very innocent and bubbly girl, so the secrets you've chosen are a little off. even though she's very serious about jonathan, her boyfriend, she might not be the type of girl to even almost have sex -- and a girl that innocent isn't all that likely to cheat on anyone.

3) you've given sephy a family, which is good; only it's not the same family that shows up in the canon list. as you're the first person to make one of the bender kids, you can choose the parents' names and ages, but her siblings should be storm, her twenty-two-year-old brother (an actor), and paisley, her twenty-one-year-old sister (an aspiring singer). i already mentioned that persephone grew up in vancouver, not seattle. she had no brother who died, and her boyfriend's name is jonathan miklic, not brett.

thank you for showing an interest in crazy dreams come true, and please let me know when the app has been changed! :)

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